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[求助]英语好的的帮我写篇短文 [复制链接]

(U15)Giovanissimi

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发表于 2007-10-13 09:53:14 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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我的外教课要求我自己写篇短文  
但是我不会写 
所以请大家帮忙
就写我们的国际米兰的
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麻烦啊
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长久以来,我已经习惯成为生活的旁观者,而不是参与者,使我丧失了激情,所以,我是时候投入到生活中去了

Allenatore

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沙发
发表于 2007-10-13 09:55:03 |只看该作者
ICN  全体人员出洞……………………
什么是幸福?幸福就是猫吃鱼,狗吃肉,奥特曼打小怪兽。
我补充下:男人有女人日,女人有男人钱!

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Presidente

邪恶的小正太

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地板
发表于 2007-10-13 10:02:14 |只看该作者
呃,我英语差的哟,绝对比你差,短文两个字都不会写
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Prima Squadra

悟空滴小马甲

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发表于 2007-10-13 10:11:04 |只看该作者
<P>LZ好久不见了啊....</P><P>这文章随便到那里抄几句就是的撒...</P>
    为你裸奔十三年,如今有件华丽衣裳了吧···

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Allenatore

南无阿弥陀佛

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发表于 2007-10-13 10:13:19 |只看该作者
<P>我是英语白痴</P>
宝贝健康成长!!!
http://u.youku.com/user_show/uid_sjz%e7%ac%91%e7%ac%91

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(U17)Allievi

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发表于 2007-10-13 10:15:01 |只看该作者
<P>To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English during the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress.
   The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it.
   Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain “a sense of English language”. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are “good English” and which are not.
   Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English.</P>[em08]
我住长江头,君住长江尾,日日思君不见君,共饮一江水.此水几时休,此恨何时已.只愿君心似我心,定不负相思意.

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Leggenda

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发表于 2007-10-13 10:23:48 |只看该作者
楼上的明显是复制!!!
小时候我希望米兰队降入乙级,后来我改变了主意,最好降入丙级。意甲存在于我们的DNA中,我们决不偷窃冠军,也决不会降入乙级.

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发表于 2007-10-13 10:25:03 |只看该作者
我是看到LZ的ID才进来滴
没有签名行不行?

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Presidente

邪恶的小正太

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发表于 2007-10-13 10:26:39 |只看该作者
<P>huihui..............</P><P>黑灰化肥会挥发发灰黑讳为花飞,灰黑化肥会挥发发黑灰为讳飞花</P>
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发表于 2007-10-13 10:29:51 |只看该作者
<P>人家求助帖,流水也水,真是不厚道啊</P><P>绕口令好难说</P>
没有签名行不行?

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